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Chapter 4 - The Drawing In The Backpack

The silence inside the speeding SUV was suffocating.

I stared at the drawing in my shaking hands. A man on the roof of our apartment building. A sniper rifle aimed at my little boy’s bedroom.

If I leave the train, they pull the trigger.

“Oh, God,” I choked out, covering my mouth as a wave of nausea hit me. “He’s been trapped there because they’ve had a gun pointed at us this whole time.”

Adrian snatched the drawing from my hands. His dark eyes scanned the blue ink, and his jaw tightened so fiercely I thought his teeth might shatter.

“Carlo didn’t just hold him hostage,” Adrian said, his voice dropping to a terrifying, lethal whisper. “He turned Daniel into a prisoner of his own devotion. If Daniel stepped one foot out of that railyard, Carlo’s sniper would kill his son.”

Adrian grabbed his radio, pressing the talk button.

“Marco. Change of plans. Call the cleaners. I want a team dispatched to Nora’s apartment building immediately. Sweep the rooftops across the street. If you find a sniper, do not ask questions. End him.”

“Copy that, Boss,” Marco replied through the static.

I pulled Ben tightly against my chest, burying my face in his hair. He was so small. So innocent. For four years, a killer had been watching him sleep, holding our family’s life by a thread, just to keep my husband in a cage.

“We’re here,” the driver announced, throwing the SUV into a harsh turn.

We smashed through a rusted chain-link fence, the heavy grille of the vehicle tearing the metal apart like paper. The convoy of black SUVs skidded to a halt in the center of the abandoned Southside Railyard.

It was a graveyard of rusted metal and broken glass. Dozens of decaying train cars sat on overgrown tracks, shrouded in the thick, suffocating fog rolling off the nearby lake.

Adrian stepped out of the vehicle, pulling a sleek black handgun from his shoulder holster.

“Stay in the car, Nora,” Adrian ordered, his eyes scanning the shadows.

“No,” I said, stepping out right behind him, keeping Ben safely inside and locking the door. “I need to see him.”

Adrian didn’t argue. He signaled to his men, who spread out in a tactical formation, their flashlights cutting through the dense fog.

“Find 409!” Adrian shouted.

We ran down the narrow aisles of rusted steel, our footsteps crunching on the gravel. My heart hammered in my throat. Every shadow looked like a man with a gun. Every gust of wind sounded like a cry for help.

“Over here!” one of the guards yelled.

Adrian and I sprinted toward the voice.

Sitting at the very edge of the yard, partially hidden behind a collapsed cargo container, was a heavily modified train car.

The numbers 4-0-9 were faintly visible through layers of rust and graffiti.

The heavy sliding door was sealed shut with a massive, industrial padlock.

“Daniel!” I screamed, throwing myself against the freezing metal door. “Daniel, are you in there?!”

No answer.

Just the hollow echo of my own voice.

“Shoot the lock!” Adrian ordered.

Marco stepped forward, raised his weapon, and fired twice. The heavy padlock shattered, raining metal shards onto the gravel.

Adrian grabbed the handle and heaved with all his strength. The rusted door groaned in protest, then slid open with a deafening screech.

The smell hit me first. Stale air, damp wood, and something metallic.

Adrian raised his flashlight, illuminating the inside of the train car.

My breath caught in my throat.

It was empty.

There was a ragged mattress on the floor, a bucket in the corner, and a small, battery-powered lantern.

But Daniel wasn’t there.

“No,” I sobbed, stumbling into the car. “No, he has to be here! The note said 409!”

Adrian stepped in behind me, his flashlight sweeping the walls.

“Isabella got here first,” Adrian said, his voice laced with bitter anger. “She must have called Carlo’s men. They moved him.”

I dropped to my knees on the dirty wooden floor, my hands covering my face. We were too late. After four years, we were finally minutes away, and they had taken him again.

But as Adrian moved the flashlight across the far wall of the train car, he stopped.

“Nora,” Adrian whispered. “Look at this.”

I lowered my hands and followed the beam of light.

My heart completely shattered.

The entire back wall of the train car was covered in photographs.

Hundreds of them.

Pinned to the rusted metal were pictures of me and Ben.

There were photos of me walking Ben to his first day of kindergarten. Photos of me buying groceries. Photos of Ben playing in the park. Photos of me crying on a bench on the anniversary of Daniel’s disappearance.

“They took these,” I whispered, touching a photo of Ben eating ice cream. “Carlo’s men took these and gave them to him.”

“It was psychological torture,” Adrian realized, his voice thick with disgust. “They showed him pictures of you living your lives, proving they were always watching, always close enough to pull the trigger if he rebelled.”

I traced my fingers over a photo of Ben blowing out candles on his sixth birthday.

Then, I noticed something strange.

The edge of the photo was slightly curled. And peeking out from underneath was a tiny sliver of silver.

I peeled the photo off the wall.

Taped to the back of the picture was a small, silver key. And written on the back of the photo, in Daniel’s frantic handwriting, was a new message.

If I am gone, check the family crypt. The angel with the broken wing.

I turned around, holding the key up to Adrian.

“The Moretti family crypt,” Adrian breathed, recognizing the location instantly. “It’s less than a mile from here.”

Before Adrian could say another word, the sound of a heavy metal door slamming shut echoed through the railyard.

Then, a voice crackled over a megaphone from the darkness outside the train car.

“Drop your weapons, Adrian!”

Adrian immediately pushed me behind him, raising his gun toward the open door of the train car.

The fog shifted, revealing a dozen heavily armed men stepping out from behind the rusted containers, their weapons trained directly on us.

But it wasn’t the men with guns that made my blood run cold.

Stepping out from the center of the group, holding a detonator in his hand, was a man I saw every single day.

“Hello, Nora,” the man smiled.

It was Marcus.

The friendly, elderly neighbor who always brought Ben cookies. The man I trusted to watch my son.

“Marcus?” I gasped in horror.

“I told you I’d always keep an eye on him,” Marcus sneered, his eyes completely devoid of the warmth I had known for four years.

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He held up the detonator.

“And right now, I have a sniper on the roof of your building, waiting for my signal to blow Ben’s car to pieces.”

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